Grey Heron 蒼鷺

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    PONYSIN
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    Just share the common bird of Paris Ris Park
    C&C are most welcome.

    Pony
    Grey Heron ?? 01.jpg
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    #365713
    ptlee
    Spectator

    Nice series you have here.

    #1: good exposure despite the white skies in the BG :kudos thumbsup: , too bad the bird was looking away, so eye contact isn’t that ideal. The twig blocking the bird is a minor distraction, but since this is an environment shot, I’d say it’s ok. Wish for a bit more open space for the bird, without it facing the tree/leaves.

    #2: Good eye contact, good exposure. I find a tiny bit over-sharpened, but that’s ok in general. Good job!

    #3: white seems a bit hot, and the bird’s head angle doesn’t quite do it for me, not because there isn’t eye contact, but if you want to show it is hunting, wait for it to bend down a bit more for the ‘hunting’ posture.

    Good effort! :applause:

    Cheers,
    PTLee

    #365720
    PONYSIN
    Member

    Hi PT

    Thanks for viewing and comments.

    I had try to make the white balance again for #3, it’s seems better than what I post, thank you.

    Pony

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